Your prompt for Tuesday August 25th
Instead of an opening passage, the prompt this week is a line from verse two of Annabel Lee by Edgar Allan Poe.
Please feel free to change the first word to, for example, he, she or they.
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(We) loved with a love that was more than love
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Use all or part of it at the start or somewhere within your poem or prose.
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(We) loved with a love that was more than love
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Use all or part of it at the start or somewhere within your poem or prose.
Mothers Truth
a Haiku
Tiny hands touch soft
a love that was more than love
Slipping away soon
8 comments:
An excellent last line. There's an emotional power to this.
The memories will last forever.
Excellent. But dont let it slip
This has made me feel a little teary. Those precious moments we have with our children are so fleeting. The haiku form fits the sentiment you are expressing really well. Great work!
Thank you all for your kind comments. The baby in the Christmas present is going to 3rd Grade tomorrow.
Short yet sweet and profound.
Short and sweet.
Sweet..
you have passed your absurdity to me
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